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Silene

71 years old from Sweden


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So In Love With You by M.A.Meddings

2008-10-03
You and her.
The most poetic love i will remember for ever.


Dangerous by M.A.Meddings

2007-05-13
Feelings floating fluently.
These lines are running like a firm waterfall down a steep hill.
A focused direction to the dangerous end.

Energetic poem!


To Win Me Once Again by M.A.Meddings

2007-01-09
Sweet words from a sweet man!


Merry Christmas to all! (An Acrostic)

2006-12-25
Beautiful poem with a lovely message, Zoya!
A Merry Christmas to you!


Flowers in December

2006-11-18
One of the most beautyfully written poems i have read here.
I am deeply touched.

So fragile and at the same time - strong - words.
Words of roses and female sorrow in snow - not hidden - but sheltered.

This is no fatal sorrow.......just gently touchable winterpetals of redcoloured feelings.

I will never forget this poem.
Even if its still november.

*bookmarked*


Please Give Us Our Tea Back by M.A.Meddings

2006-11-12
If you gently ask the Queen, i am sure she will pour you a cup of her black fragrance from the royal can!


Meditation in the Summer Evening

2006-11-12
This is a kind of "bardo" for me.
Especially these lines makes it true!

Sit cross legged
as I do now
on the cushion
of the gliding
choir to erase the
inky mazes of mind.
Be one with
the cicadas


Love that stanza very much.


Stop All The Clocks a poem by W H Auden

2006-10-31
Deep as a moonless night...
Love the second stanza.


Footsteps in the rain

2006-10-10
This is a poem containing bittersweet memories. So beautiful and touching.
Words of mother-of-pearl....shining and fragile.
Very lovely written!


Lunar Enchantment

2006-10-09
A woman looking at the moon. (And your beautiful new picture suits so well to your lovely poem.)
For me, this is a very feminine poem.
A subtle identification with the power of the night-shining godess. Gentle is her expression - powerful is her effect.

Like you - maybe?
Yes.
*nodding*


Indescribable

2006-10-09
Impressed!


Sybaritic Guitars by M.A.Meddings

2006-10-09
The second stanza (hear, hear - i listen and learn *smile*) is very powerful. All the senses are included here.
Love it!


Ride Sweet Baby Ride by M.A.Meddings

2006-10-04
This is a poem to sing out loud!
Wish there was a melody....i can feel the pulse in my vains........

This could very well be a classical poem - to remember for always.


Buzz buzz little bee

2006-10-04
So sweet!


The Turtle Dove by M.A.Meddings

2006-10-03
Hello my friend!

This is a memory of guilt.
I can identify - because i almost have the same experience. Just that it was a swallow hit by a car. Almost dead. I shot it and buried it under a tree. Must have been 10 or something...

You know i love to breath....and because of that, may i suggest this, please?


I found a turtle dove one day
Quite dead as if it was made of clay
And as I stooped in sorrow care
I found a trail of blood was there

The bird had died without intent
A random shot
its death not meant

The arrow shaft so fast and start
Had pieced the bird into the heart
It died at last some two furlongs on
Dripping blood from an open wound

No more to Sylvan depths I go
Nor wander free in driven snow

For fear of finding the emblem love
Quite dead as clay The Turtle Dove



Beauty of Flowers by M.A.Meddings

2006-10-01
Fragile beautiful words, carrying a scent of an english garden...
And the gardener is the keeper of love.
The last romantic hero.


A walk on the moon

2006-09-30
Love this space-poem!

I just want to let some air into it.
To be able to breath between the strong messages.

Am i cruel if i dare to suggest :



A walk on the moon
Please baby come soon

Come before afternoon
Come before June

At night when I wake up
I see the moon and the skies

I speak to the skies
To tell you to come
As fast as you can

I'm missing you
We really need you

It's been a long time

A walk on the moon
Please baby come soon

Come before afternoon
Come before June

How long it will take
Don't tell me which day

How long I'll wait
Don't tell me how many days

Just give me a hope

You will see
our first baby



Roses by M.A.Meddings

2006-09-29
*sigh*

Thats all i can do, reading these so poetic and tender words.
I always will.


Until The End Of Time by M.A.Meddings entry for Kathy's what is love challenge

2006-09-29
Nice and well structured bones of love!


I Wait For You Still ('How am I' challenge)

2006-09-29
So wonderful to love life - in spite of all the sorrow.
Your poem makes me think of Bob Dylan's song: "How many roads...."


I Am Nervous by M.A.Meddings entry to How Am I Challenge

2006-09-26
Charming and very cute!
If the phone is inconvenient, why not write her an e-mail...


Words by M.A.Meddings

2006-09-22
Gentle, sweet words from a free bird!
I listen carefully to the language of wings...
And i will return. I will.