| Haiku's of Religious Expression
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2007-08-03
Phenomenal! Simply Phenomenal! The imagery here is as breathtaking as the message related...beautiful work!
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| Pieces of a Dream
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2007-08-03
All I can say is "WOW"! Probably my favorite from you Aaron...well done!
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| The worthless gender
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2007-07-31
I say he should be hung from the highest tree on main street at noon!
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| Pure Like Flowing Water
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2007-07-17
Very tallented indeed Sir Aaron! Nice writing and message here...keep them coming.
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| Divine
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2007-07-16
Beautiful picture...and even better writing!
Congrats on another fantastic write...great work!
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| A Garden Party?
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2007-07-16
Very nice, Kathy! I enjoyed the meter and the "traits" you gave the veggies.
Nice piece here.
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| Beat
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2007-07-16
HA! You got me with that last line! I hate the dentist too, but apparently you hate them more!! :<
Well written..nice work!
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| When Mistakes Make you Stronger
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2007-07-16
Well done Aaron! You write exceptionally well for ANY aged person...much less a young fellow.
Good job lad, and keep 'em coming!
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| Slipping away
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2007-07-16
Very nicely written and well related. Moving!
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| yore my yin
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2007-07-16
Love your work! Beautifully written.
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| Pictures of Angel
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2007-07-16
WOW! I mean seriously...WOW!
Beautifully written, and the imagery is top notch!
Other than that, I'm speechless!
Well done.
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| Greedy Red Toads
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2007-07-14
Outstanding write from you two! Pain is all too present it seems, but we can't live without it! Although the "temperature" of the work is warm, I felt chills from the minute I began reading it.
Wonderful work!
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| Stopping-place
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2007-07-14
Beautiful write! Moving and touching...particularly the last line!
Well done!
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| The lost
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2007-07-14
Wow! Very nice piece there Jasmine!
"Oh, would you please,
Return all those things you took from me"
Sometimes the things that are taken from us allow us to learn and be stronger for future experiences. A dear friend of mine wrote, "we gain strength when we are hit with another blow". These words ring so true.
Powerful, frank writing...nice work!
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| there has been bad poems since my last confession
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2007-07-13
OH MY!!! The lunacy of it all! All too familiar to me.
Well done...I relate to and enjoy your work.
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| My Definitions of Death
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2007-07-13
Rich and telling...hard to ellaborate on such a subject, but you have done it exceptionally well. Kudos!
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| Words of Fire, Writ in Heart's Blood, Over Surface of Water
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2007-07-13
Riveting write...full of passion! Your work is amazing!
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| Beggar
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2007-07-12
Excellent last line! I feel the same...almost guilty...when I see these people. What separates us from them anyway?
Very nice piece...kudos!
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| Lost Childhood
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2007-07-12
The broken meter and rhyme of this work accentuate the feeling of falling apart. A feeling I received from reading this remarkable piece. It has a sort of a demented sing-song feel as well...I mean this in the absolute most complimentary way as it binds perfectly with the theme in mind....loss of innocence from an obvious childhood cut short. Of course, all childhoods are cut short it seems, and the carefree days therein are painfully lost as the innocence fades.
See there...you've got me going with this work of art. Absolutely perfect imaging here...well done good man!
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| knowing
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2007-07-12
WOW! Absolutely beautiful and, dare I say, "sensual" write!
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| Identity
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2007-07-12
relatable, moving, and well-written. well done!
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