| Ditched
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2010-07-13
Ephemeral and touching.
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| Unclean
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2010-07-13
Been a long time since I was here, and this is the first piece I found.
Wow. loved it. Great imagery, really evocative.
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| Letter to the Landlord
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2009-04-08
LOL, you crack me up!
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| Day of the Dead
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2009-03-11
This was wonderfully revealing.
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| Norse Winds
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2009-03-03
Great metaphor, nicely displayed.
Cool.
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| A Real, Clean Limerick
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2009-03-02
Excellent post! Very nicely done, and I love the way you worked from one limerick to the next. Exceptional job.
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| In the hemispheres of brain
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2009-03-02
Wonderful piece, very evocative.
I like what you did with the subject matter.
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| I Don't Give A Damn, But I'm Warning You Anyways
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2009-03-02
Full of raw emotion, very evocative, I could feel your heat in every line.
Damned fine piece.
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| Letting the Seuss Loose!
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2009-03-02
A tremendously fun ode to a tremendously fun writer.
A tidbit of trivia for you Suess fans: did you know he pronounced the name to rhyme with 'voice', not 'noose'?
I know, I know, everyone else says it that way, and that is the way we all learned it.
Does not change the fact that this poem rocked. ;-)
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| In year two thousand and nine
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2009-03-02
A terrific piece. I agree with the sentiment, but it was also well written and flowed beautifully.
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| The Birthday Party Weekend
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2009-02-27
Woops, I meant four YEARS, lol, thanks for the catch! ;-)
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| Liar Liar!
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2009-02-27
So you know my ex-wife, then?
Seriously, this is terrific. It always amazes me how some folks can spin the thickest bullshit and assume that nobody around them has a sense of smell.
Very cool piece.
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| Androcles and the Lion (PC)
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2009-02-27
This perfect!
Exactly the sort of modern twist I had envisioned. Oh, this is really quite good.
Thanks so much for playing!
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| Chivalry: A Tribute to Poe
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2009-02-26
Brava! A fitting tribute to Edgar Allen, and a fine poem all by itself.
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| roses are born from the dirt
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2009-02-26
Wonderful. A perceptive look at the Janus of relationships. ;-)
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| Off course
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2009-02-26
This was a terrific meditation on love, and the power of belief.
Loved it!
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| Ten Minutes
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2009-02-26
Very evocative piece, poetic prose.
Keep it up!
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| The Masks
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2009-02-25
I loved this. I collect masks, and have often felt this exact way.
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| Lost Souls
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2009-02-25
This was wonderful, full of great phrase turns and imagery.
I especially loved the shroud of Turin on her pillowcase. ;-)
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| Everything seems the same but yet should be diffrent
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2009-02-25
The voice in this piece seems lost, just as you would expect someone in this situation to be.
Cool.
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| YOUR PASSION
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2009-02-25
Beautiful in its simplicity.
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| Waiter! There's a Typo in my Soup!
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2009-02-24
This was terrific, sort of Shel Silverstein meets the Galloping Gourmet! ;-)
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| My Little Daisy
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2009-02-24
Very sweet!
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| Tears of the Heart
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2009-02-24
I think you meant 'heart' crying in the first line, but honestly, I think the poem would also work quite well with 'heat' instead.
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| Indigo Sheets
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2009-02-24
I liked the way you compare and contrast two lovers, without giving either one the edge. ;-)
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| Splendid richness of the soul
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2009-02-24
I enjoyed this a great deal, the emotional sense it conveyed, and the flow of the words.
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