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The Wilderness Walk

2008-10-04
Kathy, the journey is still there, the journey never ends, in my own opinion i think that the journey or the quest is infinte and it keeps going, the only thing i can do about it is just learn from it and educate myself along with upgrading my defensive weapons and buy some shoes for the blisters....i am READY for the desert, yup....one step at a time is fast, i go much more slower than that, i go one eighth of a step or something...


~Max


Come on and let me know . . . .?

2008-10-02
the flow of this poem is very good, it makes me think while im reading it, but you know Dan....

You should stay,
for tommorow is new day,
we don't know where is love,
down underground or high above,
i believe life is always full of hope, like you wrote,
and it's a lifetime trip, so sail with a good boat...



~Max


number nonsense

2008-10-02
"i'm one but inside i feel two,
one is my soul the other is you,
i asked the same question hundred times,
nothing answered back expect the three chimes,
i tried to find ONE answer for why?
but things let me down and made me cry,
number 12 is ONE and TWO,
it was one but now it's few,
see the number 12 resembles me,
as i am one but frankly there is two..."


with best wishes

~Max


Redemption

2008-09-30
yeah i feel the same way, sometimes i think im passing that thin line between success and failure going to sucess but i found myself failed at the end :S but anyways that doesnt mean i will give up at all...i still wonder have i made any one proud yet...but you know what matters is you yourself, if you can make yourself proud then everybody will be proud of you, if you respect yourself then others will respect you...keep ypu head up high always...peace of mind and ambitions hmm i always say people who have great ambitions have great worries, so if you worry alot know that you have alot of ambitions, this is exactly what im thinking of right now , your words are hitting the right spot in my mind...
"The pleasures of small achievements
and self belief,
are all but a glass wall.
Easily shattered.
"...this is great, i mean expressing those small acheivments like glass walls is WOW, they are but you know i always try to support glass with small fibres..never heard of fibred-glass?? even when it shatters it holds it self and doesnt fall off great eh! :P
break free from your expextations WOW you write in a way that can unloxk things off my mind, i mean i do understand this so much...
i feel the same way and i alwasy asked the same question to myself..this is great
*APPLAUSES*
you're such a writer,
i liked reading this text alot
and welcome to the bay...
im happy that your first text left such a great impression :D *smiling*


~Max

BOOKMARKED AND FAVORITE


I've Lost Me

2008-09-27
why is my comment not showing Adrian???


~Max


I've Lost Me

2008-09-27
"With the right man even a girl without plan, a girl could win" i believe god already knows people that we will meet and i think if we are good people we will always be meeting good people, you know you are very rich very rich, imagine how much worth are your kids, husband sisters family and everybody you know !!! I'm rich too,, welcome to the richworld, he true rich world that wont ever go away!!

~Max


I Am Not Getting The Message (this is for you)

2008-09-27
i wrote a comment on the Nature temper's Haiku, the problem is the first writing to the text is the best then the other one is just trying to make something up and i just dont like that...with best regards and hoping this shows up

~Max


Nature's Temper Haiku

2008-09-27
Oh wow i like this it's exactly what i needed to read, i think of myslef as nature also, winds make me fury, and water makes me calmn down, the wind is like bad things and water is my beloved woman...

~Max


Let Me Give You My Hand

2008-09-27
Gving is better than recieving i totally agree, this write i can feel within the folds of my souls and heart, maybe cause we are apart, maybe cause im just getting so thoughful while im reading this, but Kathy i don't know, your texts give me hope and somehow help me during this period that im going through, god may help you too, all my hearts and prayers for you...

~Max


Caramel Apples~ Fall Delights

2008-09-27
Caramel, what a delightful treat, sometimes sinfull, or delightful now i cant make uo my mind,,,umm i like how you decided to take the caramel at the end, cause i wanted the caramel too. Hey Kathy, how are you doing ?


~Max


Tranquilizers

2008-09-24
i knw how it is like with surgeons, i mean my realtive died because of blood cancer yet they tried thier best to suck every dime of her blood before she died...
I am sorry for your loss
~Max


Looking forward imperfectly

2008-09-17
"I admire the cranky bastard
who wakes up, breaks wind
and then floods the bathroom."

I AM A CRANKY BASTARD i admit it, hehe i loved this one soooo much, nobody's perfect if we were perfect we wouldnt need each other yeah imagine if all the world was rich!!!!!

~Max


Solitaire

2008-09-17
hello, you know Elle, i love being alone most of the time, but im not antisocial. I found another person inside me that i can trust , i mean two different personalities and they are living inside me in harmony you see, i find loneliness very realxing sometimes i mean c'mon even when im with someone i feel that sometimes i need some time alone.

~Max


I dreamt a dream for you . . .

2008-09-17
"Dreams can come to life if
you really believe in them."
you know i was told that before, but i also discovered if you have only one person to believe in your dreams with you , it will be really nice, i mean c'mon if only the person i love will believe in me and my dreams i can move mountains, yeah mountains, now who took my coffee...not you....wooof

hugs from both of us, *wink*

A/M


new haiku

2008-09-13
Yes you are totally right, walls were built always to keep danger outside, i mean if we are not afraid of pain why are we making walls and weapons.

~Max


A BIG Jerkasaurous

2008-09-12
The name attracted me frankly, when i started reading it i thought now where is that Jerasaurous he mentioned in the title and when i arrived at the end i knew where he was. God...you are like speaking about a whole population of Jerasaurouses haha they are still here...

~Max


Radio in the City

2008-09-11
oh this had a very nice effect on me, "sleeping with your eyes wide open" such a contrast behind these words, i sleep with my eyes close but they are open cause my mind is thinking about things. I love this one so much, last verse especially.

~Max

BOOKMARKED


...I can start to hope that...

2008-09-10
Das ist sehr gut, umm ich bin Max, hallo..well i love the questioning style alot..it leaves the reader with such wondering effect...

~Max


The Vase

2008-09-10
me, i a big fan of concrete pooetry, i like the way this poem falls under the force of gravity upon my mind Kathy, you know i think whn people in love they shape each other and then the heat of love pures imperfections your right, i can see it clearly...

~Max


MY NOT SCANT FAT RANT

2008-09-10
Oh god i love hot brownies,
GOSH, they are such a tease,
when im depressed,
i get a sandwich pressed,
in the hot grill toaster,
OH some jelly and peanut butter would be nice
nibbling my chesse sandwich like hungry mice,
i mean food is friendly and yummy
who's to blame except my hungry tummy...:S

i was depressed one year ago that i locked my self in a room eating low fat cereals, chocolate and drinking milk for a month and i gained about 12 Kgs of my weight, they are still with me but im going dowwwwwn yeaaah....

~Max


Beside a grey rock 3

2008-09-09
Oh i can hear the waves too, a distant pirate ship closing by,,,
oh it is just your words and the coffee effect, BUZZZZZ

~Max


Oh give it to me . . .

2008-09-08
yeah exactly i feel the same waywhen i want somthing really bad i cant hold myself of exictment.

~Max


No control... understand me?

2008-09-08
i feel every word you have wriiten here, this one is in my favourites and bookmarked

~Max


The Circle of Love

2008-09-08
Im in love with how you describe love Kathy, i know that there is hope in love and im waiting kathy, it is hard i know but im waiting,,,sometimes waiting hurts so much Kathy, i dont know what to do...


~Max


More Than Anything...

2008-09-06
Dear Kathy, i can't tell you that i really know what you are going through, but i felt a part of it one day and i was so depressed. Kathy you are strong, strong because you are you, what would the beloved one want for you now, being strong? do it dear Kathy. You can cross the channel across it's dragging streams, you can enlighten your days with the sweetest memories. I dont know if i should be teling you this, but Kathy you are the ONLY one who can make it better for yourself, we can only light thouse small lamps along your path, but you will choose the path. Kathy...i..i

~Max


The child of art (part II)

2008-09-05
what is it with your poems, they do attract me why why why??
well i want to comment about each verse alone but i will only choose my favourite one of these lines:D

"Drive me out of my limits!

There are no limits!
Expel the darkness

the darkness of
oblivion and
ignorance!"

yeaaaah it is like im born to be wild...I LIKE THIS...

yeah

~.....(wink)


mirror mirror

2008-09-04
i like this, mirror can be friends or enemies but ur right a beautiful soul do remains untouched, great work

~Max

Welcome to the poetbay, and we wish to read more of your works soon.


Fickle Pickle

2008-09-04
this is so fun to read,
lucky larry found fickle on to feed.
LOL

~Max


Pink Boots and Curls

2008-09-04
i had an image of my daugther Mariah, she was like your daisy:) but my Mariah had Dark hair and pink shoes.

~Max


Where is Bruce Willis, when you need him??

2008-09-04
haha, i like this one
exactly when are our super heroes when we need them?

~Max


Where is Bruce Willis, when you need him??

2008-09-04
haha, i like this one
exactly when are our super heroes when we need them?

~Max


Where is Bruce Willis, when you need him??

2008-09-04
haha, i like this one
exactly when are our super heroes when we need them?

~Max


In Your Eyes

2008-09-03
i was going through my bookmarks, i found this poem, god thank god i found it, i read it and enjoyed it, like everytime i read it, i will print it out and put it in my room that is if you dont mind, it always remind me that somewhere somehow there is love and care. Thanks Katherine.

~Max


Burning heart

2008-08-30
"Touch me now
make me feel that you think of me
as I do . . ."................WOW

These are some of the greatest words written in love, i really loved your poem and i felt a little bit of pain as i am away from the woman i love but your poem brought her closer to me...


~Max


I Haven't Forgotten PoetBay

2008-08-30
"For I will hold my head up high,
and my tears.....
only the dark shall see."
I Really want to know who said these words, they gave me support when i was down, so i suggest that you start writing we want to read your poetry, WELCOME BACK

~Max


I Haven't Forgotten PoetBay

2008-08-30
"For I will hold my head up high,
and my tears.....
only the dark shall see."
I Really want to know who said these words, they gave me support when i was down, so i suggest that you start writing we want to read your poetry, WELCOME BACK

~Max


I Haven't Forgotten PoetBay

2008-08-30
"For I will hold my head up high,
and my tears.....
only the dark shall see."

God i wish i can remember who wrote these words, they gave me support when i was really down and YEAAAH you better didnt forget the Poetbay, welcome back and yeah WE WANT TO READ YOUR WRITINGS !!!:P

So, we want something really strong to hit the bay with a beacon of light a sound of music come'on get your hands on that keyboard and start writing.

~Max


AAAACHEEEW! (Limerick)

2008-08-30
Hahahahaha, i hate cold AAAACHEW!!!
i like the pictures you made me see in my head :P

~Ma AAAACHEW X


The Power of Pain

2008-08-28
When i was born my dad wasnt around me so my uncle raised me, my uncle died when i was 5 years old. Althought my true biological father is alive and he loves me but i dont feel that i have a father, i learned one thing from the pain since i was 5. When ever i wanted to see my uncle i dreamt of him, i was young and i really didnt know what it meant when they told me that my uncle is died, i thought he would be gone for sometime and come back again, but when i came to reilize that he woul neer come back again, i cried and cried. One thing im doing right now, im making my uncle proud of me im making myself a better person for him, if he was alive he would have loved to see me become a better person. God bless your soul and i know one thing that i can embrace you from where i am right now. All those loved ones will unite with us again all in one heaven, i think about this way, god tok him cause he is a good person and god will reward me by uniting me with him again, im sure, have faith.


Love and Hugs,

~Max


HISTORY >>>>>>>>>MY STORY

2008-08-28
When i read the title i was preparing myself to read a story but when i read ur few lines i felt that i read one. I like the way u expressed with only few words lots feeling

~max


In Your Eyes

2007-09-18
Kathy, this is like finding a never ending stream of love in heaven, i loved it so much bookmarked of course.

~MAX


Get a life,

2007-09-17
WOW WOW WOW
SLOW DOWN hehe
i take this poem very seriously especially if u knew Martial Arts, hehe
I must be catuous from women yeah:D
lol

Liked it so much, i usually like poems where the writer acts in anger from a pian or agony, i like how you defended your life and fought for your indepency in your life. I could use your poem against some poeple i know too, hey GET A LIFE it will work belive me, it lifted me when i was down thnx...ive seen the look and i know the score this line is now written on my door hehe..

~MAX


Happy Birthday Aliena!

2007-09-09
It always does that in my PC too, listen Zoya if it asked you to debug just press YES, i press yes all the time and it works with my PC for like 3 month, hehe

~MAX


Invisible

2007-09-05
Complaining is bad i know, because all of the time i end complaining to the wrong one, who doesnt care what my problems are. Most of the times when i was in school i was the invisible guy not seen by others, i was used to it, i liked it sooo much that most of my times i complain but to my pen and paper...

~MAX


1st Impression

2007-07-06
Sometimes we have to hide our pain so to show others we arn't weak sometimes we hide pain as for to move on our lives...sometimes we hide INside our pains and that when people doesnt get to know you very well...


~MAX


its only you.....

2006-12-30
I can feel true love my friend, well exprssed from ur heart...
Hope to be friends

~MAX~


It's in you find it!

2006-12-16
Yeah ye who seek shall find it, i always wonder how much i have to seek and is it enough? How do i measure how much do i have to seek? Do you know? Anyways i always try to smile at things that i dont know believe it works :).....

~MAX~


The sacrifice of the. . .

2006-12-08
WOW!!! this peice of poetry is very...(totally speechless)

RATE: Beyond description

~MAX~


My beautiful baby girl

2006-12-08
That is very touching...may god bring you both together...again

~MAX~


My beautiful baby girl

2006-12-08
That is very touching...may god bring you both together...again

~MAX~