This poem is kind of fuzzy, but I like it :-)


Take me somewhere...


Take me somewhere
where I could se the air
butterflies in different colors
where everybodys gameplay is fair
we all share, because we care

Take me somewhere
Where I could touch the words
so I could sense it, feel it
fly high with wings like birds

Take me somewhere
Where I could breath the blue heaven
sleep in the cotton called clouds
where everybody is forgiven

Take me somewhere
Where the trees are purple
and the ground is blue
the reality there, a beutiful view

Take me somewhere
Where my eyes are pink
and my mouth speaks through
the colours of what I think

Take me somewhere
where my feet lifts of the ground
dancing high, happily
drifting away in the breeze of the wind
and the world becomes my sin

Take me somewhere
flying like a butterfly




Poetry by Malin Johansson
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Written on 2006-05-07 at 12:43

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Rik The PoetBay support member heart!
"Take me somewhere flying like a butterfly"
This one line conjures so many thoughts and paints so many images. Such longing in the words of this poem. A longing for peaceful freedom. Really enjoyed and felt this read.
2006-05-09


Mirage
That inner yearning... beautifully expressed in this poem, that could also be made to a song! :)

One day I believe we will all fly high, free and light-hearted... butterflies of the soul...
2006-05-09


Zoya Zaidi
It is a most beautiful poem, Malin darling.
"Take me somewhere
Where I could touch the words
so I could sense it, feel it
fly high with wings like birds"

I like these lines the best...
The whole idea of touching the word is really unique!
And yes, nothing funny about it.
(((hugs))))
love, xxx, Zoya
2006-05-07


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
hey Malin i love this poem you get better anf better each time you write well done

rgds mike
2006-05-07