little poem

 

~

 

pebble in the road

waiting to be kicked

by the the head down

wanderer, or the

head down wanderer

waiting to be tripped

by a pebble in the road

 

~

 

 

 

 





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Written on 2016-10-04 at 14:55

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A great meditation. Reminds me of Stephen Crane's little poems
2016-10-07


Jamsbo Rockda The PoetBay support member heart!
A clever little thought. Even small things are not be inconsequential.
2016-10-06


Lawrence Beck The PoetBay support member heart!
Yes, depends upon the size of the pebble, I suppose.
2016-10-05



This little poem is a large delight. Well done!
2016-10-04



Or the road gearing up to absorb the weary falling traveller
Or the traveller spitting road grit at a powerful little pebble
2016-10-04


Bibek The PoetBay support member heart!
Beautiful how you reversed the effect. Not a small poem, no way! A BIG one indeed.
2016-10-04



Like drowning in a glass of water. Great little poem.
Ashe*
2016-10-04