This is the first poem I've written in a while so it's not so good...


I still love you
so I hold on tight
and yet you pull
with all your might
And when you're gone
I'm all alone
with the buzzing
of the dial tone
I hang up
this chapter ends
Now we are
less than friends
I try to call
but you're not there
I leave a message
hoping you'd care
As I wait
the tears stream down
the phone rings
and I turn around
My breath is shallow
my heart beats fast
Hoping, dreaming
to undo the past
It rings again
as I realize
I don't need you
and empty disguise
You're just a face
and not a man
As feelings go
I don't think you can
But suddenly
I hear a voice
The machine picked up
and I have no choice
I listen closely
and know it's you
I hope you'll say
"I love you too"
But all you want
is your jacket back
I pick up the phone and scream,

Words by IronicBanana
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Written on 2006-05-12 at 23:23

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I agree with CherryFairy...this is really good! Go you! :D

haha. I started out all, "aw!!! he's gonna go and she's gonna be all sweet and awwww!!!"
and then i was like, "screw him, bitch!!"
haha. sweeeeeeeeeet poem!!
And, I DO like it!!