Ann Wood
Nice poem Jim well done, I love it.
2018-03-13

Lawrence Beck
Scary. The real thing can be like that. Good luck.
2016-11-10

Love the grace and power of this metaphor, and the subtle discernment of so much within body language alone. Intense and lovely and so well-crafted.
2016-11-08

Kathy Lockhart
This leaves me with a foreboding. I am left wondering what is happening and why. With every description, every detail, you lead to this end. There is power in this! Well done!
2016-11-08

The power in these words is almost frightening.
It feels like a powder keg about to explode and the last two lines will resonate in the readers minds for a ling time.
Strongly felt.
Ashe
2016-11-08

difficult to go deep in this poem,
i don't understand
but something your movement to the music to be sure

but something something within
take it or leave it with a caveat
don't even try if you don't mean it

i meant
the psychology behind
2016-11-08

Jamsbo Rockda
I like this a lot. It must be so calm before a tsunami. I hope the waves carry you where you want to go.
2016-11-08

Bibek
Hmm ... good one. Enjoyed this.
2016-11-08