I don't like the last two lines, so I made an alternate ending:
Where the hell is
my cellphone?!


Silence presses
on my ears
Awakening my
sleeping fears
Slowly driving
me insane
No reason for this
empty pain
Lost in darkness
all alone
No emotions
ever shown

Words by IronicBanana
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Written on 2006-05-27 at 18:29

Tags Silent  Dark  Empty 

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Amanda K
well we pass thru this time.it's very true

i heart the last two lines!! though where the hell is my cellphone WOULD work also... though i prefer the one you wrote down.
smiley face!!