Longing



Oh you handsome man
would you give your eyes to me
If I winked

Oh you handsome man
could you touch my body
If I gave in

Oh you handsome man
can't you feel the longing





Poetry by Malin Johansson
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Written on 2006-05-28 at 14:08

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Amanda K
a cute one but quite short. u could say more,dear.

Regards,
Amanda
2006-06-26


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
Malin this is a beautiful poem and demonstrates what i hold true you are avery tallented young poet and destined to be a real fav on this site rgds your cyber father
2006-05-28


Pamela A Lamppa
Longing, wanting, wishing OHHHHH my. A beautifully emotional piece. Nice work. ~Pam
2006-05-28