An old poem I wrote: 2005-04-29


Existance



When I see my hand move
I can't feel it

When I no longer can hear my breaths
Unaware I breath even faster

When my eyes are paralysed
I feel my heartbeats


But do I exist?






Poetry by Malin Johansson
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Written on 2006-06-01 at 17:12

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Amanda K
we pass throug many dilemmas,disasters, troubles and hard time so i guess can pass thru that, as well. i feel that u do try to express ureself thru ure poems yet u r reserved somehow. i wish u all the best.

cheers,
Amanda
2006-06-06


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
of course you exist this poem proves it a good poet even at 18 just keep writing

and you will get even better

rgds cyber father
2006-06-01