Been awhile since I've written this style of poetry I'm a bit rusty lol

Midnight Serenade(A Pantoum Poem)

Lament the midnight serenade
Silence the lovers dance
of love, a heart betrayed
on love don't take the chance!

Silence, the lovers dance
Intertwining into one,
On love, they've taken the chance
And around the room they are spun.

Intertwining into one
The lovers doth dance slow,
around the room, they are spun,
shining in the moonlight's glow.


Poetry by liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2020-01-10 at 06:07

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Thomas D The PoetBay support member heart!
I always like to see poets tackle the more challenging forms. There's a delightful ease to the stanzas, rather like the slow dance of which the poem speaks. Enjoyable!

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ken d williams The PoetBay support member heart!
A wonderful work has always, Lizz.
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