Give up(pantoum)

A broken heart given up
Innocence that became corrupt
From a wolf disguised as sheep
the cost of love has not come cheap.

Innocence, that became corrupt
by others careless actions
caused by fatal attractions,
to one who does not know how to love.

By others, careless actions
love caused by fatal attractions
to one who does not know how to love
cause a broken heart to give up.


Poetry by liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2020-01-12 at 04:03

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I think your language is very economical here. A firm grasp of rhythm.