A posy of hail
sideways cascades
down in wind blown sheets,
the sound is deafening.

The rain pelts down sounding like a drum,
a posy of hail
hitting the ground hard, falls
down in wind blown sheets.

the rain changes direction, it
sideways cascades
down drenching everything,
the sound is deafening.


Poetry by liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2020-01-20 at 10:59

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I like this. The language is economical and strong, and the rhymes are sparing but effective.