Hailstorm(Renrhyme)


A posy of hail
sideways cascades
down in wind blown sheets,
the sound is deafening.

The rain pelts down sounding like a drum,
a posy of hail
hitting the ground hard, falls
down in wind blown sheets.

the rain changes direction, it
sideways cascades
down drenching everything,
the sound is deafening.

20/1/2020.




Poetry by liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2020-01-20 at 10:59

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I like this. The language is economical and strong, and the rhymes are sparing but effective.
2020-01-20