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NOTE:  2020 06 09  08H58 EST  Angels (Apparently) - 




Angels (Apparently)

 

- observations... things people say... thoughts...

 

We are two people who by any standards

Have been through way more than 

We should have been made to go through

And that's putting it in the lightest terms

 

Those who come close enough to find out

All have the same reaction as concerns

How overwhelmingly tragic it's all been

And, for most, they'll earnestly feel awed

 

The most common remark that gets made

Is the genuine wonderment they feel

About how having been so mistreated

Hasn't hardened our hearts to others

 

We are viewed as very kind and loving

Apparently to an unusual level

I don't know

You're just you; I'm just me

 

The way I figure it is that we know pain

We know hurt and we know devastation

Caused by the thoughtless behaviors of others

Why go out there and do the same we suffered?

 

There's really no effort to put into that

Whether thinking about it or doing

Our natural response is to make things better

Hell finally escaped, we won't allow its creation

 

Especially not by us

That'd be senseless





Diary by F.i.in.e Moods The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2020-06-09 at 15:00

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Lawrence Beck The PoetBay support member heart!
That is unusual and admirable. People who've been through hell usually bring some of it back with them.
2020-06-09


AFRODITE STATHI
I want to read it and read it again and again.I know it is childish for someone to say just i liked it about a poem but that is my first reaction.I like it a lot.Especially when you write...Hell finally escaped,we won't allow its creation...this is a line that remains in mind.So encouraging.
2020-06-09