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NOTE:  2020 08 11  10H28 EST  On Writing My First Ghazal - 




On Writing My First Ghazal

 

- ;) ... while figuring out the form (which I didn't find too obvious), these are the lines that came to me... 

 

I took a few days to mull it over

Still think it'll be tricky for good results!

 

So I tried this, and I even tried that

All sounded too gimmicky for good results!

 

A capricious little form this one is

One'd say, most finnicky for good results!

 

'Cause look at all I could manage so far

Poor thing's all clunky; not good results!

 

So, I, Ms. Moods, must concede defeat

Am too much of a rookie for good results!





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Written on 2020-08-11 at 17:06

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ken d williams The PoetBay support member heart!
I know all to well of what write
BUT - at least a work appears
That is yours - all yours - MS Moods ;
Ken D
2020-08-11