An answer to Nigth Soul Woman's wonderful text "The battle and the death" and my other text "The battle and the honour"
Sincerly Dan


Coming back to life



It is so Hard baby
but I am struggling
to overcome myself

To ride the wind
and getting back to life
what I have seen

Is just a nightmare
but fuck so true
hope no one else

Going to see the same
and I am ashamed
I didn't could do more

I have cried rivers
of all my tears
waking up with nightmares

But I am not ever give up
because I am still tuff
and the battles never ends

So still and slow
I return to life
thank you my love

You never give up
my life
peace love and understanding




Poetry by Dan Cederholm
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Written on 2006-06-12 at 16:17

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Teala
Very good--a lot of emotions flying at me here--love it!
2006-06-12


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
a powerful rendering of emotions here well done Dan a 5 from me rgds mike
2006-06-12