A LIFE WALKING



In the beginning of time
that's called my life
there was only innocence

I grew up with time and crime
with so many verbal thoughts and words
grew in my mind

But the wind and soul
was chancing my mind
now I understand what's right and wrong




Poetry by Dan Cederholm
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Written on 2006-06-27 at 11:15

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2006-06-27


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innocence going through experiences that change perspectives on life and things we cannot begin to understand their full impact until we go through them personally... right and wrong truly well understood with life's changing tides... thats how i understand this poem... very nice... gives the feeling of a moment of reflection about where life was at at one time and where it is today... with a clearer understanding of personal evolution, if we can say it that way... well, made me think of where i was and where i'm at myself today... good ponderings... thanks for sharing :f

later... xx
2006-06-27


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Its a nice expression of life. Just for the sake of language though, shouldn't "innocent" be "innocence" and
"groove" be "grew"?
Just checking...
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2006-06-27