Trying to find a better title for this one

Fix you

It's not my job to fix you
But thank you for telling me
how you're broken

Cos when the handle
of a favourite mug breaks,
it doesn't get thrown away

I'll learn to love you with both hands

Poetry by Inspired
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Written on 2024-02-07 at 18:37

Tags Fix  Love  Broken 

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D G Moody The PoetBay support member heart!
I liked this, a short poem that conveys more than some longer ones, keep going!

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ken d williams The PoetBay support member heart!
I suggest you leave the title as it is, inspired. It works well.
Ken D.

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