Teala
The emotions in this poem are so very gripping, I love it!
2006-07-10

Mirage
A split soul...
Aren't they everywhere nowadays?

Good writing; you can feel the pain and see the tears when you read this poem.
2006-07-08

lastromantichero
and yet another of your brilliantly
exposive texts so gentle in its style but so telling in its perspective rgds mike your father
2006-07-07

Oh dear Malin dont cry alone!!!a sad poem but very nice written!!!kissess
2006-07-07

Arti
A powerful statement with simple words...
Stop for a moment to enjoy the simple beauties of life - it dispels a lot of the frowns and tears for smiles and peace... Works pretty well for me... Especially when I miss having People around me.
((hugs))
2006-07-07

Kathy Lockhart
So much more or you Malin. This is a very deeply honest and personal expression of your struggles. Your ability to write is the door that is opened for you. Send yourself out that door via your words. Someday you will carry them out yourself. You will let the Sun shine! YOU! kathy xxx kathy
2006-07-07

tony
such a vibrant thought, drawn out, to be sure, and yet, hardly overextended...i like the effort, put into the bits and pieces of emotion, creating an overall understanding...though, perhaps, a bit choppy, nevertheless, a great piece, relatable, and sincere...

while this bit of writing claims to be a bit personal, the perfect stranger can still read it, without much effort, and that in itself is a tribute to the author. though, this isnt something to shatter any regulations of poetry, still an interesting piece of writing...
2006-07-07

Thomas Selnes
Oh. This reminded me so much of one of my own texts ("Dead weight" check it out, maybe you'll see what I mean. I might just be overly spaced out today ^^).

Anyway; nice read!
2006-07-07