An old poem!
Sincerely Dan



Break out


Even in the darkest moment
there is a sign of hope and joy
to fulfil the undone project
that's been waiting
for such a long time

even in the lightest moment
there is sorrow in my mind
have I fulfilled the work
that is all mine, and it hurts
and gives me Pain

But out in the sunny light
I can breath clear in mind
my home has become
a jail to me, so I break out
free in spirit, free in mind




Poetry by Dan Cederholm
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Written on 2006-07-16 at 12:16

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pia
i hope that you will eventually find the strengh to get out - there is a lot to see outthere but i know what sadness can do to you and I think that you express it so well Another beautiful poem from you - Pia
2006-07-25


Zachary P. B.
Beautiful. An excellent write. Poetry can help us break out too, it is an escape into a memory or a moment that we'd rather stay in. I loved it.
2006-07-17


night soul woman The PoetBay support member heart!
Although life is not black and white
sometimes it feels like that

But keep in your mind
that you wouldn't feel happy if you didn't experience the opposite feeling.

Maybe light need darkness in order to exist and vice-versa.

You don't need to go far away in order
to feel free :)

If your spirit and soul feel free, nothing can stop you, nothing can hold you ;)

But do you feel free or is it just an illusion?
(a filosofic question :) )
Good poem

Take care
2006-07-16