To my friends, rock on hippolitos


The hippos had a dream
That never no one seen
the competitions

Was that in that dream
He was jumping
from tree to tree

But when he starts
to jump whit that big body
the trees are moving

And not in his way
so the story ends here
people take care

Don't try to jump
in trees if you're
not a monkey




Poetry by Dan Cederholm
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Written on 2006-07-20 at 12:49

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F.i.in.e Moods The PoetBay support member heart!
lol now thatd be a sight... hippo in a tree lol good one that :) this makes me think its a warning on not pushing the limits of the feasable and reasonable... the imagery gets the point across with weight, i find... very nice, i enjoyed this.... thanks for sharing :f

later... xx
2006-07-21


Zachary P. B.
A whimsical and light-hearted write. You make me smile.

Z
2006-07-20