Perfection


Perfection we speak
we wish
we dream
we believe in perfection
an everlasting connection
But love is lust
from the first seconds
that we breath
while looking into new eyes
the fresh paradise
Then the eyes becomes
familiar, knowned, usual
and the lust fades away
to lay underneath to stay
To become nothing but hot ashes
the fires stops burning
but the heat is still there
of memories, thei memories

Perfection we seak
untill we almost finds it
because perfection is happiness
perfection is success
Or does perfection exist
the lust of fire that has faded
becomes to love
strenght and stability
responsebility
between two souls
in two hearts
and in the strong love
they grow
they dont shine, but they glow
But still we believe in perfection
our soulmates to come
for perfection to become
and forgets about the life
the path you have walked
with the one who is holding your hand
connected with a special band
the lust has been replaced
then be aware
that saftey and care is in the air

Perfection we try to breath
try to sniff
as we walk on different roads
the straight road
that we abroad
where humans walk
the ordinary road,
also called the boring road
but it's near perfection
straight forward in direction
It's not the path in the wood
bumpy with cliffs
stones and trees
the head wind, the tough breeze
We think we can walk
on the straight road
without doing any effort
but soon reality will hit us
then perfection is not to discuss
It will make us realice
that the straight road
doesn't take you anywhere
so instead be brave and prepare
Step on the bumpy path
to learn how to appreciate
the straight road when it appears
face the fact, your fears
Then it will come to you
with so much strenght
that you'll believe in fighting
for better and for worse
because perfection is just an illusion
a bad curse




Poetry by Malin Johansson
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Written on 2006-07-28 at 12:28

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Marianne
Very good! I like this one..
Almost everybody want perfection
We can't have it, but we can always wish, and dream about it. I like it a lot.
2006-07-29


Zachary P. B.
Beautiful, Malin.

I loved these words and the description of perfection, an ideal and a place we all want to be and experience, but so far away and unreachable.

Sorry for taking so long to comment this masterpiece... I've been on holiday...

Sweden is officially the best country ever...

Zachary
2006-07-29


Arti
Perfection... Is an illusion of a mind with nothing better to do. lolol
Great write... Keep up the good work, Malin!
((hugs))
2006-07-29



Perfection we speak
we wish
we dream....but I believe there is no perfection....lovely poem here indeed!!!!kissess
2006-07-29


Kathy Lockhart
Malin this is so full of complexity of thought. Your wisdom about the straight and the bumpy roads is right on target. Thank you for sharing this well written verse. kathy
2006-07-28


night soul woman The PoetBay support member heart!
Perfect rythm and flow!I love this poem!It's so strong and wise!Like you My Dear!

Thanks for sharing your thoughts!That is not only yours!the rest of the world share the same thoughts but you were the one that could put them in words and then in a paper so it will remain for years and years to come!

*storming applause*
2006-07-28


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
Malin this is word perfect rythm and rhyme perfect and indeed you are achieving perfection with your texts
rgds cyber father/grandfather lolololol
2006-07-28