has anyone experimented with poetic method or themes? well this is mine won't make the book but perhaps u can enjoy it ( or write me comments and pretend to) :D :D


Airport Blues

In Traffic,
Switching from lane to lane,
Front fender smashing,
Too many Nutragrains,
Gotta get to the airport fast before I go insane,
If the Nutragrains weren't bad enough here comes a train
All these cars around me,
Two kids looking sad ,
On the way airport beacuse they miss dad,
The car behind me of a woman scantily clad,
The car in front of me thinks driving slow is the latest fad,
But all this shit, is just gonna do is make me raving mad.
Get to the parking garrage, "$20 a spot!?"
Must be smoking rocks to think im paying $20 a spot.
I rather park my car down 2 miles away,
Get out the car and see a couple in a desperate fray
Im seeing more kids keeping their lowly parents at bay
Cuz' they're scared to death of what their 3 year olds might say.
In the terminal, had it up to here
When I walk in a airport I apparently rile up fear,
Better ask God to walk with you near,
Cuz if thats my pilot I think he had 6 too many beers.
Going to the metal detector.
"Stop Sir where you are."
"Lemme' see your bag,
Tags,
Rags,
And looking at you lemme see your flag."
"Take your shoes and your socks off,
Criscross sock- hop,
latex glove, thourough exam,
Pants drop,
Wheres constitiution when you need it?
Must have been pick up bythe dust mop.
..............
............
........
After they determine an hour later that I wasn't Al Queda
They wished me a good flight, "See ya later!"
Luckliy this isn't Star Wars for I can choke a bitch like Vader
Have that security guy bend to one knee and cut him a mullet like Slater.
But I make it to plane all dirty mad and violated, Nutragrains got my stomach twisted,
But the fucked up part is, My flight-
I missed it.




Poetry by wolfthepoet
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Written on 2006-09-20 at 12:47

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Sage
I can feel your anxiety.
2006-11-03


Arti
I can identify with this, although I've never been strip-searched. I flew home recently, and I'd have loved to throttle the whole bunch of security agents. Made it to my flight to the rumble of the passengers' grumble though... :D
2006-09-20


BlueyedSoul
Does this mean I can't take my lipstick on the plane? .....great 'rant" spun with plenty of your dry humor....i liked it, i liked it alot.

~Blue
2006-09-20



Been on a short holiday trip in the last two weeks and have had to go through airports no less than 16 times.
It is both a hateful and exhilarating experience.
There is a good twist of humour and forthright reality in yoiur lines. Enjoyable read.
2006-09-20