it's a work in progress but
an anwer to my song challenge.


[song] No More Living Fantasys [Under true illusions now]

[INTRO:]

A dreamer my whole life
living fanstasys bringing only strife
time to wake up to realitly
under true illusions now

[VERSE ONE:]

when I was young
living fantasys and make-believe were fun
Now I am grown
I still hide from realitly
A dreamer all my life
But it's time to wake up
and live in the real world now

[PRE-CHORUS:]

pretending fairy-tale make-believe
I thought you were the one
believed all my fantasty lies
and put my heart on my sleeve

[CHORUS:]

But i'm under true illusions now
no more living fantasys
facing realitly is hard
for a dreamer like me
but when it comes to love
i'm no more living fantastys.

[VERSE TWO:]

Hiding in daydreams
mistaking lust for something real
now there's only echos of screams
as to truth and realitly i'm forced to feel.

[PRE-CHORUS:]

pretending fairy-tale make-believe
I thought you were the one
believed all my fantasty lies
and put my heart on my sleeve

[CHORUS:]

But i'm under true illusions now
no more living fantasys
facing realitly is hard
for a dreamer like me
but when it comes to love
i'm no more living fantastys.

18/10/06








Poetry by liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2006-10-18 at 07:01

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Cr4Ky
you nailed it! this is a great song liz!
verse 2 really rocked:D enjoyed reading this!:D
2006-10-19


keith nunes
a cool piece liz. great lyrics and feel to the song. reality - it is a shit of a thing sometimes!
2006-10-18


wee2souls
sing like you never sung before!!!
Bring on the rhythme..loved this much
wow Liz:))) great writer you are:)
a song sung beautifuly:))
hugerama to you
cindy
2006-10-18