never enough

a bar so high
rises each time
i try
i am
never enough
for you




Poetry by la tristesse
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Written on 2006-10-26 at 13:05

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brian paglia
As I read your collection,I can see that you are the queen of few words.Not a bad quality for a lady:))But seriously,your style is refreshing;it challenges the writer to have his/her ideas well thought out.I'm enjoying your work and finding inspiration with each piece.
2006-10-26


Mark J. Wood
That hit
The stomach's pit.

That is a Tyson of a poem.
2006-10-26