moving on

there is
an invisible
pain
in moving on

on return to
the place
i felt
i outpaced

a stagnant
fragment
of time and
space

a pang
of pain
speared
me here

for those
lost souls
who chose
to stay






Poetry by la tristesse
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Written on 2006-10-29 at 19:28

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brian paglia
What can I say? Totally jealous of how you capture so much, so quickly.You the mam!!!
2006-11-01


David Hazell
There's a lot of poetic class here. deep without being overdone. Great read.
2006-10-29


Mirage
A little beauty this piece!

I like very much to ponder
the invisible pain...

The end part hits me with sorrow...
2006-10-29