buns

like buns
fresh from
a baker's oven
i rise from my bed
all warm and soft
plucked from the
hot cavern
by callous fingers





Poetry by la tristesse
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Written on 2006-10-31 at 09:04

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Mukul Dahal
Very sharp and brief. Powerful piece. Bravo.
2006-11-08


Sabrina
I liked this a whole lot,
we are just like buns. ^^

*Hugs*

Sabrina
2006-11-01


maxmedo
yeaaaah

Like buns lol

I love the idea

Brilliant keep on

Did u think about like fruits?

~MAX~ rate 5
2006-11-01


brian paglia
someday you'll teach how to say everything in so few words.thanx for a pleasant start to what seems like is going to be one of those days.I'm going to court to support a friend that's accused of a horrible crime.Not sure how to feel about the whole thing.Wish me luck!
2006-10-31


Chris Fernie
Naughty baker!

Seriously, I really like the imagery.


Cheers, Chris
2006-10-31


Zainab
nice
^^
2006-10-31