Heartfelt


Feelings are hard
when they aren't controllable

Like the breeze in the storm
it is crushing in
in to the fragile leaves
and soon they are about to fall
drop down gentle to the unknowness

Feelings are hard
when fear rushes in
into the bare bones I'm made of

Feelings are hard
when love is inside of me
and it becomes unbearable
impossible to handle
Because my heart feels
My mind fears the worry
and as my soul shivers
your arms are missed
feelings beyond
the touch of our passionate kiss

Feelings are hard
when they are real
because this is love I feel




Poetry by Malin Johansson
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Written on 2006-11-03 at 22:36

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Teala
This is such raw, deep emotion. I love the italics and the layout, too. Brillant write, yet again~!
2006-11-26


Sabrina
Bra gjort Malin!! :) En mkt vacker dikt...

Kramar,
Sabrina
2006-11-06


Zainab
Well done
I could feel each word in this poem
Rate:5
^^%
2006-11-06


Amanda K
the title attracted me but the content was more attracting. an excellent expressed piece. all the best.
2006-11-06


seda
''Feelings are hard
when they are real
because this is love I feel''

I loved it, :) very well written

Love,
Seda
2006-11-05


Arti
Feelings are hard when they aren't controllable,
and when you cant do anything about them!

Very beautiful write here, Malin. I loved this. :))))

((((((hugs)))))))
2006-11-05


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
hi there Malin this is a beautiful poem and is so telling of trhe deep love you have in your soul

well done rgds mike
2006-11-04


Kathy Lockhart The PoetBay support member heart!
deeply moving Malin. It is beautifully displayed as well. Your talent sparkles!
2006-11-04


Zachary P. B.
beautiful, malin... as always. well wriiten.
z
2006-11-04


Rik The PoetBay support member heart!
Very eloquent piece portraying the fragility we fear when we have so much to possible lose. If only our minds did not project into the future so baisedly. Very good read.
2006-11-03


night soul woman The PoetBay support member heart!
Wow! What a great and passionate poem!!! Well written Malin! and your photo fits with the poem! A passionate poem from a passionate poet!!! *applause* B O O K M A R K E D!!!! O F COURSE!!!!
2006-11-03