My

My life useless as it lay
It wished to leave me though I needed it to stay
My soul distances in the air
My heart in need of someone to care
My life a burden in this world
My hair all twisted and curled
My love lost in the sea
So far away from me
My star to high
To high to catch in the dark sky
My eyes betray me
So far a distance to see
My life crumbles in a hand
Pieces spread all over the cold frozen land




Poetry by Ariel Bennett
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Written on 2006-11-04 at 17:54

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Dan Cederholm
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So sad poem, makes me feel so much

sorrow. But it is a great poem with so

much of emotions that it could crack a

stone to dust!!! BRAVO!!!

Regards Dan

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2006-11-04


-Angela
i'm having trouble commenting here... the sadness takes my words from me...
2006-11-04