Thanks KJC for letting me pick your brillent mind.


Harmonising Echoes[Co-write with KJC]


Bouncing ideas off each other
like echo's rebounding off cliffs,
creative flow taking on a life of it's own
soaring pilot and co-pilot to new heights.....

flying upward in echo streams I hear you call
my name continually from shaky cliffs that fall,
crumbling words fall like soft sand flying upward
reaching distant lands, I reach the top
soaring on sound waves beckoning me on....

Beckoning me on
to unexplored poetic planes
two different wave lengths
becoming one and the same.....

hear the sounds of collective thoughts
rushing on the winds currents
soaring upwards on the sound waves
formulating melodies that only you and I have found...

our individual talents blend perfectly
for we're similar brains working in harmony.

07/11/06



Poetry by liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2006-11-07 at 03:06

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kid
This is a well written co write i like it. When we work in harmony things will get better.
2007-03-07


Nagamuthu Osho
Respected Poet,

The wonderful rhymes, produce prodious verse.
The unique verse, so sloace to read and repeat...
God Bless you,
Thanking you,

Yours truyl,
N.K.OSHO
2006-11-16


la tristesse
that's such a sweet working relationship, well expressed
2006-11-07


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Wonderful collaboration! :o)
2006-11-07


Kathy Lockhart
Harmony is beautiful. I love it in music, in life, in poetry. Wonderous write!
2006-11-07