Who are we (DNA code)?

With passion and joy
and . . .

In the light of your presence
what is natural or normal?

Magical, mystical tour
behind stars and dimensions

In chaos and evolution
by natural selection . . .

is it so?

Billions of life forms
many not known by us!

We discover our own existence!
What is our preferences?

DNA code . . .
is this our lifeline?

The Ice age is coming
or is it dissolving into liquid . . .

rising the sea level, deluge
and what is happening to the rainforest

we cut down and destroy!

They said the sun is going to expire
. . . ice age is coming . . .

But what about wars?

Killing, taking, breaking property to pieces
raping mother earth . . .

But what about our DNA code . . .
are we going insane?

Then . . .

insanity is the time . . .
and the time is out!

Poetry by Dan Cederholm
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Written on 2006-11-20 at 10:23

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Esti D-G The PoetBay support member heart!
Bravo! Excellent thought provoking and beautiful choice of words.
"What _is__ our preferences" ? Poetic license or error? I'm dying to replace it with " What are our preferences"!
luv esti x

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betsy Firefly
Ikke helt sikker på hva du mener med den nestsiste strofa her, Dan... Do you mean It's time for insanity?

I like the way you slip in the question of the DNA.

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that's kinda... i dont know what should i say.... but it is too emotional .You have expressed a truth through your.Its a very delicate matter that u have disscussed but i love it.I love the last lines they have so much of depth in it... Great Job!!!!

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