Wrote this for my "big brother" when I was 11 years old. Despite mistakes in it, i wish to keep it that way for I want to keep it the way I made for him. may he rest in peace.


Please don't look so sad, even though you feel so bad.
Please doen't look so sad, just wear a smile.
Please....just for a little while.
Please give out a little laugh,
Even though you feel a little sad.
Please know that when you're gone,
Please....say it won't be for long.
Know that you will be missed
And please remember this:
"The more we laugh, the less we cry. The more we live, the less we die."
"Life is not counted by the breaths we take,
but by the moments that leave us breathless.
The moments...in which we make"
So please remember these words in which I say
And please know that I'll be here every day,
To help you in any kind of way.
So Please don't look so sad.
And please don't feel so bad.
Please, my friend of mine.
Please know....that everything will be fine.

Poetry by Jordanna
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Written on 2005-06-14 at 03:48

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"The more we laugh, the less we cry. The more we live, the less we die."
I love that line, all alone it says so much!
I wish everyone had your wisdom!!!!

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a very good piece to be written so young - to wish for smiles in another life. a good heart.