~Dance With Me Darling~

Shut the world out
Just for a minute
Close your eyes with me
Let nothing inhibit

Capture a moment
Where nothing else matters
Dance with me darling
Our worries shall scatter

Perfectly spinning
Around this small room
The flicker of candles
Drowns out all gloom

Hearts set in motion
Eye-locked enchantment
Music embraces this
Sensuous enthrallment

Our bodies now breathless
The world fades away
At my illicit order
Tonight you shall stay

Intoxicating union
I drink in your splendor
Tonight we shall dance
To love's sweet surrender






Poetry by BlueyedSoul
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Written on 2006-11-28 at 09:06

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Winston Latanafrancia Soldevilla
I would really love to thread with you a measure.
Just to feel your vibration with pleasure.
Let's do it together like poetry in motion.
Let's feel the heat and the beat of music with emotion.

Very Beautiful! I enjoyed it.(WLS)
2007-11-11


munir mezyed
It is very romantic and makes me wonder dance with the music or with ur words.
I love this part

Music embraces this
Sensuous enthrallment

Munir
2006-12-20


brian paglia
Awesome job of passion and description.I'm reminded in this poem of the awesome power of love and attraction and it's ability to rule the heart and mind:literally rendering everything and anything;powerless in it's attempt to penetrate the force of an inspired heart.Great,great,great and even greater job!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
2006-11-30


Saga
Sway after sway, I fall into your eyes as long as you keep the lead, I'll stay on point and in awe!!! Wonderful one sweetie pumpkin!!!
2006-11-29


Peter Romance
Smooth and lovely!

"And dont forget whos takin you home
And in whos arms youre gonna be
Oh, darlin, save the last dance for me"
2006-11-28


Kathy Lockhart
This has me dancing with my eyes close, dreaming of a time where I will dance with love. This is softly romantic and sensuous. I think I will read it again. Pardon me while I do....
2006-11-28


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
Who couls resist an invitation to dance with you blue eyes
This is a beautiful and sensual invitation well done on the lovely
enjoyment in your words

wow I need a drink lolol rgds Michael
2006-11-28


wee2souls
Wheres that dang chocolate! Heat of the mommet
with this write..Great balls of fire :)) hee! hee!!
wow..WOWOO
loved this!!
hugs to you
cindymac
2006-11-28


Christian Lanciai The PoetBay support member heart!
I would if I could...
2006-11-28