HALT . . .

 

Sometime life feels shit
but it is up to us to fulfil
this grey day . . .

But often the life is great
with so many things to learn
about who we are

When I feel sad and lonely
I stop in my steps
and thinking about HALT

H . . . UNGRY

A . . . NGRY

L . . . ONELY

T . . . IRED


Then I know that
something is missing
important things . . .

that can bring us down
if we don't
take care of our self

Take a look at yourself
is something missing
in your life?

Then take care of it!






Poetry by Dan Cederholm
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Written on 2007-01-08 at 15:42

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Amanda K
it's such a valuable piece. we all should stop at some point of our life and rewind or review. there are many things to be thankful for and we ought to appreciate. how you analyzed Halt was clever. favorite.

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2007-01-20


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A great poem about taking in charge when everything feelings wrong!Instead of dweeling we should spend our time on trying to fix what make us feel that way! and what a brilliant acrostic
H . . . UNGRY

A . . . NGRY

L . . . ONELY

T . . . IRED

Yes we should stop and wonder HALT!? Am I hungry? No!(so many people go to bed hungry every night, I should count my blessings)Angry- Why do I keep feeling angry? what can I do about it? Lonely- Why am I lonely? Have I inflicted my loneliness? can I dosomething about it? maybe call a friend? Go to a museum for example? Tired - Why am I tired? what can I do about it? and so on. . .

Well written Dan!*applause*

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2007-01-08