An unhappy poem.
Sometimes I feel happiness is a false thing as there is always
someone to make you feel like shit no matter what you do.



Higher Then The Clouds/Lower Then The Dirt

higher then the clouds
my feet are off the ground
finally truely happy
My life for the better is turning around.

Then someone comes along
makes you feel lower then the dirt
they love to kick you down
forget happiness, they rather see you hurt.

11/01/07




Poetry by liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2007-01-11 at 00:23

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Rob Graber
The intro inspires this:

Dad told me there will always be those who
Will make you feel like shit, whate'er you do.
His seven words still help erase my frown;
Dad said, "Don't let the bastards get you down"!
2007-01-11



The second part of this poem is an all too true statement Liz, there is always some plucker happy to knock us off our own happiness perches. Balance is everything, there is a typo in there somewhere. Smiling at you, Tai
2007-01-11


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
yeah some ppl get a kick out of destroying others jusr because they can but stand up to them young lady well done rgds mike
2007-01-11


Kathy Lockhart The PoetBay support member heart!
I kwow full well that happens. Just keep rocking and rolling along girl. Sunshine will return.
2007-01-11


Teala
You show them, keep smiling, don't let fools get you down. Hugs!
2007-01-11


Daybreaker
Yes, isn't it horrible!

Some people just don't know how to keep you smiling! =/

Great captured!

PS: then in line 1 and 6 should be than. =)
2007-01-11