Dejan
My soul is yellow like the Sun,
but rest in the shade
of my palms,

my dear friend!
2007-01-16

Rob Graber
Well, the shadow could be of the hand holding the darkness, not of the darkness per se. Not that this--or any poem--must conform to logical constraints anyway, as I suspect Nep will agree... :-,?
2007-01-14

lastromantichero
A wonderfu ltext short and sweet and so evovcative of how sorrow gets us into the darkness struggling to emerge I have in the past enlikened it to Continuous Acid rain well done rgds Mike
2007-01-13

dear kath, i felt that sorrow too in time, so i relate to this...
5 of 5 and bookmarked

Lilly xxx
2007-01-13

wee2souls
so much meaning in this piece,,
how I understand in this write
wow.. your line:

and I in it's shadow...

gifted piece and meaning
in these few words
i so loved this
hugs
cindy
2007-01-13

Zoya Zaidi
Very well put, short, concise and says all in just few words...
Love this one Kath!
(((Hugs)))
Love, Zoya
2007-01-13

Rob Graber
Sorrow itself is made lovely by your touch!
2007-01-13

Esti D-G
Like an Escher , I go round and round with your images.
Bravo!
Breathtaking read. luv esti x
2007-01-13

salem
i love this one
short but it's realy nice
thanx
2007-01-13