my 3rd haiku it is very scary being in my head. Thank's again to Thomas Perdue for getting the syallible count right....although it did get confusing =)


Confusing Confusion [a haiku]

not confused or am
i'm not really sure if i
am confused or not

14/01/07



Haiku by liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2007-01-14 at 08:37

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Wonderful write...I like the confusion...now wait i'm confused, or is my brain...and the question is is me i or is i me

<3
Kiva
2007-01-15



i believe thomas is write about your head being a nice place to visit, and proof to that stands your work here:) nicely done
Lilly xxx
2007-01-14