we all know the classic phrase to wish upon a star well this is my wish on that little star.

Starlight Starbright

Starlight starbright the first star i see tonight i wish i may i wish i might have this wish i wish tonight:

I wish to find a man who will dance with me late into the night
and wake up the next morning and sing along with me.
Someone who won't tie me down,
but instead gives me wings to fly.
A person who will sneek out with me just to lay out and count the stars
until the night sky fades.
I wish for someone who each time i look at them i see in their eyes
not my own but love.
A gentle glow that warms their face and in turn my soul.
Someone who in my weakest moments can still look at me and say I Love You.
Who i can tell my deepest secrets to and instead of pushing me away they hold me tighter than before.
A person who who with each hug says i'll be your wall
and with each kiss i'll never leave you.
A person who is smart and confident
who knows what they want, and what they want is me.
Someone who will a life with me.
But most of all i want them to want not some of me, but all of me, and all i have to give.

Starlight Starbright can i have my wish tonight?

Poetry by Rhia
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Written on 2007-01-19 at 04:30

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josephus The PoetBay support member heart!
a wonderfully honest and inocent prayer. Nice word usage and moodcreation.

In a way very similar to the poem I posted just below yours! Yours is a wish for a paragon. Mine is a rememberance of a paragon.

Curious that we both have starlight in the title. My reference is that Starlight is my sailboat.


I am awe struck by the beauty, the feeling and the poise that seem to flow from this beautiful piece of work that goes straight to the soul.I do believe in wishes too, and I also wish upon the stars.....and believe me sweetheart,you will get your wish....It actually happens.Applause for the beautiful work!!!