Fabled sparrows

Fabled sparrows
With whimsical colors
Fled from Eden
Dancing;
A mermaid was swinging the cradle
Singing to a newborn baby
A poet."




Poetry by munir mezyed
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Written on 2007-01-20 at 21:52

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In Romanian we have a word for the fairies that make the first spiritual gifts to a newborn baby: "ursitoare". I believe your mermaid and sparrows here have the same role. And I must admit it is a most beautiful one and very nicely expressed :).

Lilly xxx
2007-01-22


anna3
How I love all these dreams you have! Beautiful and free your soul fly from one fable nest to another one in searching you find real pleasure and this is fine way too even if sometimes too light to feel real desire of true love, but these dreams are so sweet too so why not why not wandering among all these beauty you see around? Great write, have a great day and night :)
2007-01-21


BlueyedSoul
oh this is so unique and lovely to behold!
~blue
2007-01-20


Zoya Zaidi
You Sparrow reminds me of the 'Seamurgh', the fabled bird of paradise!

(((Lovely Lyricism in this poem)))
*Hugs Munir*
Love, Zoya
2007-01-20