Turn on your minds



Feel
the fragrance of today's proposed wishes

          Listen to the birds' delightful symphony

                See the cascade of new born colours

          Listen to people's aspiration for peace

Feel life's rhythmic step


                 The smooth move of the day




Poetry by Dan Cederholm
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Written on 2007-05-15 at 10:37

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F.i.in.e Moods The PoetBay support member heart!
the visual layout of your text makes a demi-circle shape on the left margin... and my mind sees it as these steps suggested to Feel, Listen, See, when they are applied daily, completes the circle of well-being and happiness to be alive... i also can see that shape as being a mind that's turned 'on', in synch with everything around and how it affects to be consciously active in appreciating the little things of every day... the smooth move of the day sums it all well in my mind... another inspiring write from you that lifts the morale... very nice :)

in line 3, colour's should be colours 'cause i think you're meaning many colours... and that's all i notice to mention :)

thanks for the smiles this morning :f *hugs* xx
2007-05-15


Christoffer Waye
Cool!
I like the rythem here :D feel like the thoughts one has during the morning buss/tram ride to work
2007-05-15