the flapperer



i have a recollection
of how i burned
back then, when i waved my arms
in my attempts to fly

.
.
.

now i only smolder
and flap instinctively
when i get into elevators




Words by MadinSane
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Written on 2005-11-20 at 16:30

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Hi MadinSane!
Good to see you back here! I remember reading this one in Swedish, it's just as great in translation.
2005-11-20


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
excellent little clever piece with the slight touch of bitter sweet irony at the end well done
regards mike
2005-11-20


blackestdaze
(flaps)

lol, i like the quirkiness of this. how cool.
2005-11-20