a taste of yesterdays rain


in a tear you glittered
in vain
craving for attention

in that tear you drowned
without being seen by anyone

you played a beautiful corpse
without being immortalized

you didn’t become anything more
than an eyes dreary spill

in a sun gleam you dried out
leaving a vague contour
of something fled
a casual sensation
of nothing at all
a taste of yesterdays rain
that I hid in my hair
and forgot
without a trace



Poetry by MadinSane
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Written on 2005-06-26 at 20:12

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R.K.Singh
It's a great thoughtful reflection: I like the epithets "beautiful corpse" and "casual sensation" vis-a-vis the taste of yesterday's rain hiding in my hair. You evince a genuine poetic taste.
R K
2005-07-06


F.i.in.e Moods The PoetBay support member heart!
im not quite sure how to comment aside from saying that this poem is absolutely beautiful... your expression paints colorful pictures that a heart can easily link to... it completely grabbed me... wonderful poetry... thanks for sharing :)

later...xx
2005-06-27


A.O.O. Augustsson
In a way the essens of the poem suits english ling better then Swedish... I dont no why
but thats my head

hence
this is a very good poem.
2005-06-27


chasingtheday The PoetBay support member heart!
arr the passing of a memory, a love that once was. i like the idea of the tear slipping from the eye and drying up to show the movement forward. nice piece.
2005-06-26