Vital

 

 

Like the colorful leaves

swirling in the wind

Thousands of natural signs

of beauty

 

Reminder of times that's been

and new times to come

 

Remaining empty tree

taking a winter-slumber

But yet so full of life

still growing

stronger and stronger

Like the kind of love

I feel for you

Even when it seems to be

at rest

it is filled with vitality

and will keep on growing

stronger and stronger

 

 ~for all eternity~

 

 

 

 

 

 

2007 © Jeanette Louridas





Poetry by Hagzissa
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Written on 2007-10-16 at 21:41

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Damon
Beautifully written piece my friend. I love it!
Damon
2009-03-05


Rik The PoetBay support member heart!
A wonderful tribute to love. Enjoyed the read thanks. :) Nice photo too!
2007-10-22


weirdzarun
The proliferation of love shall never be squelched!!!! It shall only be instigated, especially by really good looking red text! Good Work.
2007-10-20


Kathy Lockhart
this is such a brilliant comparison of love and its seasons. well done Jeanette.
2007-10-19


Will
Forgot to Note

BOOKMARKED!!
2007-10-17


Will
Beautifully Expressed
Not Unusual 4 U...


Nice Write!!
2007-10-17


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
Jeanette this is a lovley rolling rythmical poem and demonstrates you skill as a poet well done rgds mike
2007-10-16