Coelomic Musings 2

Crystal, crystalloid, crystalline.
Blood, bloody, soaking sanguine.

Hollow, empty, gasping lungs.
Kisses, missus, choking lumps.

Needles, cocaine, painful death.
Shivering, delusions, shuddering breath.

Life, death and all in between.
Every truth left yet to be seen.

Metlife, sex life, all life gone.
Shackles, tatters, windowless dorm.

Gun rack, cattle rack, kitchen rack grim.
Shattered, scattered, broken dream.

Lawless, faithless, colorless bird.
Thoughts unthought, music unheard.

Poetry by Arti
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Written on 2007-11-11 at 05:59

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Winston Latanafrancia Soldevilla
I love the way you deliver your repetetive words. The words are like sounds of never ending melodies. It's a good stuff to muse at.
I say It's a work of Art. Good write my friend!(WLS)

Zoya Zaidi
Wow, Arti! This has so much packed in one poem and really showcases (if I may use the word) your state of mind...

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Arti you are a very clever and a skillfull poet i am amazed at the realm of your talents well done rgds Mike