To the one that I love . . .
(please correct me if my English is wrong)!!!!



Senses thru the Glass



In my own imaginary world
I can see thru the glass into
another sparkling world
that color my
senses . . .

there . . .

in my own bouquet of flowers
there is one orange poppy and
three flowers from
a wonderful
apple tree

after some days my table
is full of poppy seeds, I put
them back to mother earth
I sow the seeds in
to the ground

and . . .

after some time the seed
climbs to reach the sun
and after months
there are new flowers
in my garden

I can see them . . .

from inside of my frosted glass
I open up my door and give them
water, the flowers in my garden
is the story about
you and me

how you made me

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Poetry by Dan Cederholm
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Written on 2008-03-27 at 16:13

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ZARIFE DEMIR
More the bestt poem!
2010-02-07



Refreshing and extremely creative!
2008-03-29


Kathy Lockhart The PoetBay support member heart!
a beautiful poem and presentation. I love the affirmation of life here.
2008-03-28


ken d williams The PoetBay support member heart!
The poem is fine as it is , Dan. Your poem inspired a poem/story in and from me. No greater comment can I make, Dan.

Thank , you Dan. Ken ( D Williams )
2008-03-27