One of my most favourite poems.
It is a spirital poem about the Journey of life that we are on.
Liz.



Journey

I'm feeling so focus and calm today,
nothing negative is gonna get in my way,
my eyes are shining so bright and clear,
it feels like all of my dreams, close to coming true are near.

Only I can hold myself back
if I stray off this positive track,
but there is a new me, different to the me of old,
I have started a journey - and amazed -
I follow and watch my journey unfold.

For I am going somewhere I have never been,
and my mind is unlocking things previously unseen,
from negative entrapment I am breaking free,
now is the time for discovering the true and inner me.

Focused and happy my journey feels right,
like my spirit has grown wings, and to a higher level takes flight,
everything for me is starting to click into place,
I no longer rush life by, at such a fast pace.

For whatever life throws at me, I know i'll survive it,
and I will continue my journey, until it reaches mortal end,
where I know - on a higher plane -
my journey will begin again.

Written 14/07/04, by Liz Munro.




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Written on 2006-01-03 at 09:21

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Go On... <3
2012-01-26



Very uplifting and encouraging.
It invites the reader to take a second look at life and journey in it with anticipation and adventure. At least this reader thinks so.
2009-03-12


David L Wright
Very poignant words and well done. The Buddhist philosophy believes the essence within each man and woman (the soul if you will according to western beliefs) takes several journeys occupying many bodies over an endless span of time. Happy trails neighbor.
2008-02-01


Teala
So full of strength and hope and vigour--excellent, expressive poem! BRAVO!
2007-01-03


Kathy Lockhart The PoetBay support member heart!
i can see why this is your most favorite poem. it is wonderful!
2007-01-02


Sofiul Azam
This is another "Journey" poem which I think is really good, and deserves attention from serious poetry readers.

I love the lines all the better:

"For I am going somewhere I have never been,
and my mind is unlocking things previously unseen,
from negative entrapment I am breaking free,
now is the time for discovering the true and inner me."
2006-01-03


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
nice write liz welcome to the bay
2006-01-03