Follow up to Journey.


Continuing the Journey

Along my Journey,
I've met people wise and spiritual,
and their words I should listen to
as they are deep and meaningful.

Yet, my spirit has been weighed down -
with other people's negative crap,
but with positive energy -
I am fighting the black tide back.

It is my ego controlling,
if I am angry with anyone,
just breathe and let it all go,
focus on my center,
don't fight - just swim with the flow.

eyes that were clouded -
with impentrable mist,
are once again bright and clear,
and more of my dreams close to coming true are near.

Each persons Journey is their own and unique,
there is no right or wrong, failure or sucess,
as each of us tries,
to only give our best.

And although we all stumble and trip,
by the wayside and occasionally fall,
the negative thoughts can block you from rising,
it is these times when not giving up,
is the hardest bit of all.

04/12/05.



Poetry by liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2006-01-03 at 10:50

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David L Wright
Nice follow-up with an interesting message. Happy trails neighbor.
2008-02-01



I don't know if you agree with me on the point that this one is better than the former, specially when I come across these lines:

"Yet, my spirit has been weighed down -
with other people's negative crap,
but with positive energy -
I am fighting the black tide back."

I hope you will continue your steadfast journey towards poetry as well; and I would like to hear what you have to say about your dreams and the positive frame of your mind as soon as you can.
2006-01-03