This was inspired by Anna's poem 'I feel helpless' (on Poemhunter.com), she got stuck writing a poem, after I read what she had written I got this into my head.


Going off the rails

I'm going off the rails -
and disappear,
I can only watch them.

Sliding too fast downhill -
and I miss the sudden bend,
my loved ones hate to watch me reach this end,
Especially as I refuse the help they have tried to send.

04/01/06



Poetry by liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2006-01-04 at 05:03

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Black Knight
When suddenly you notice life is torment,
Before you'll break your dreams and kill your hope,
Just ask yourself - and what I do this moment?
I truly know - it's never late to stop.
2006-01-04


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
accept the help is my advice a young lady like you with such talented poetry
regards michael A Meddings
2006-01-04