My boyfriend wrote the chorus


Shouldn't have DONE it

[verse one]

Your heart is pounding in your chest
and you can't get it to stop,
fear has gripped you in it's icy fingers
it's frozen touch, in your bones still lingers.

[chorus]

You know you shouldn't have done it
you know you shouldn't have gone
you know you shouldn't have said it
[but] like a fool you still carried on
like a fool you still carried on.

[verse two]

Consequences you don't wanna face
so instead you turn and you run,
But it still haunts you -
like lost souls forsaken-
the stress of it all on your body has taken.

[repeat chorus]

[middle 8]

Your chest is about to explode
lost souls forsaken haunt you
Fear's trapped you in it's grip
on your body consequences toll has taken.

[repeat chorus twice]

Like a fool,
like a fool,
like a fool
you still carried on.

16/01/06



Poetry by liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2006-01-17 at 08:08

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GB
Hi ! ... All good ! ... Like this piece ...espec the chorus .... just wonder if maybe the chorus should be spoken first ... try it and see ... otherwise rather good ! ... Like it ... Glen ( GB ) ...
2006-01-17